Frostbreath's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Accident Chain.]

Very good!

I have no problem with stick figures... if the animator actually knows what he's doing. You obviosly do, which makes me glad. I even feel good about this being a stick movie, beacuse i don't think many people could've done it equally as cool with realistic people.

This flash is very.... bright. You didn't use black as colour for your outlines, but a darker shade of the colour used in the object itself. It's a plus in my side, so don't stop with that. I can't review something without critizising anything, though. At the end, the ''Created by'' text looked awful, and was hard to read. Animate it the same way you did with all the backgrounds, objects and people. Comic-ish with fat outlines.

Even though i pretty much dispise the entire genre of rock music, Offspring is one of the very few bands that i think are actually pretty good! So, you have made a great choice right there ;)

One person actually died! Although it was his own mistake for holding that knife, but who can predict that a flowerpot will hit you? All the violent acts was of high quality, so you get an 8 not from the quantity or gore, but of the artistic value.

What would've made this flash even funnier would be if you just slowly scrolled thr background, instead of having this flashing thing, where you suddenly are dragged to a new scene. Have thses things happen in a hallway, where the camera slowly follows the series of events. Hopefully you'll understand my ramblings :)

You might want to move on to more advanced animations, involving more realism, and alot more detailed backgrounds. Beacuse from what i can see, you have a broad quantity of talent. Keep it up!

~ Frost

Dirge09 responds:

Thanks for taking the time to write such a great review, I'll definetely take into account all of your Critic, and yeah, he died because he was mugging the pink stick, I should have made it more obvious, but I was being lazy.

[Fap to NG acts: Frostbrth]

Hwof hwof hwof

Well, it's what i signed up for. I'm very pleased, too ;)

Yeah, it's a great flash. Nice graphics on the intro with the building flashing. Not very detailed, but it's a nice view. The kids (your?) room had more content with Missile Masta on the wall (nice :D) and a decorated desk. You did not daw the poster, nor did you create the NG layout, but what difference does that make? Really? All the images has high quality, and i think you made a good job on the graphics part. The only request i have would be including more details. But i'm only sweeping for holes, here.

Thanks for using my audio! Great way to advertise it. It better get featured on the front page as well, for even more attention ;). I like that speech engine, though i don't know it's name. And that song at the end gives me the creeps. Beacuse you probably know as well as i do that it's also featured in those flashes containing a fat old man wanking :O

*shivers*

I laughed my ass off. Seriously. Maybe it was the complete exposiure, or that i get to see another persons view on me (may it be fictional, too). I still found it hilarious. Being the victim is a scary feeling.

Great work on these flashes, and i hope you continue :)

~ Frost

QwertyBoi responds:

Excellent. I'm really glad you liked the updates I made to the cut scenes. I suck at drawing with the mouse so they took a little while to make. So I appreciate that. :)

I kind of had to use your audio. I mean it sounded good and it would have felt complete if I hadn't used it. ;) Oh and ahah! Yeah. I remember those flashes of the old man. Adding that song at the end of each flash seals the deal on every episode. XD

I'm also happy that you don't think I'm an asshole for some of the things I said and that you just laughed it off and enjoyed the flash.

I'm pleased, that you're pleased.

Thanks for the support man. =)

[+Pancakes+]

Oh boy.

Why yes, pancakes are awesome. You must've had great experience with pancakes yourself, since you can draw them ever so nicely. And not only can you draw pancakes, you also animate backgrounds and facial expressions that can easily compete with the top artists on NG.

You do have your very own unique animating style. When i open the flash window, i can immediatly tell if the animation has or hasn't been done by you. It's unique, and i love it.

Haha, great song ;) It's only worthy of a flash of it's own. Again, more plusses for the perfect lyp-sync. And since this movie was short, you didn't have to worry about busting the filesize limit by increasing the quality of the song.

The only minus would be the length. I really could've seen this as longer, with more plotlines, etc. This was merely an intro.

~ Frost

[Bbq the secret agent]

GG

You win. Bonus stage unlocked.

But what is the story behind Simon the Steak? Is he a vicious killer? A mobster boss? Or just a lawyer threatening to close down the Pepsi corp. Nevertheless, he's been taken care of. Reel gud.

Now this is what i want! This is Bbqbeefburger in his finest suite. He's well drawn (as alawys) talk via Speakonia perfectly, and has the best punchline i've ever heard.

*Bark bark bark*

But what's always coolest on your movies is the preloader. Keep up this work, beacuse it surely is a pleasure to view them. Everytime. Everyday.

I shot the sheeerriiiiff.....

~ FrostyWosty

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

But,did vicious man Simon The Steak die?

[Bahamut N' koreaman 01]

So true.

But i knew it all along. This is yesterdays news. And now, the world knows! Muahaha!

Great job, boy.

</insert random tag here>

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Fagamut

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 22]

...

omg adolf must be soaked.

You rock roflmuffin. and to the DEVIOUS AFRO_STUD: YOU'RE A GENIOUS!

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Hitler is waterproof.

[Bbq walking down the park]

I'm in the mood for constructiveness.

So, i'll put my serious face on. Let's start. I'm glad that you did something else than the epic Beefburger episodes, though i'm not quite satisfied. First of all, you intentionally went for sloppy graphics. This doesn't have to be a bad thing, you just have to increase the other points a bit. Like Arfenhouse, although Misteroo did have great graphics on some parts. But it's a hole that needs filling here, instead.

The music fits, so that's all fine. And you chose the crappiest gunshot sound ever to be find on purpose. That's okay, but as i said, you'll have to increase the other points a bit.

As for the humour, all you'll get for me is a lowercase lol. Sure, it's fun that he makes an epic decision and at point blank distance blows the head of the pedestrians. But, THIS ISN'T ENOUGH. You know what would've been really awesome? You making something else than a short. Like a BBQ flash going for five minutes. Where walks down the street and insults random people. For example, it's your choice. It's just somewhat tiresome to see you feeding the portal with 2.00 - 2.50 flashes, just for the sake of a broad quantity.

However, you will shall always be a part of my favourites list.

~ Frost

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Well i feed portal with 2-2.5 flashes sure,but then again,thats all im going for.

Thanks for review though.

[barbequebeefburger XVII]

Sorry to say...

I've never really gotten the point. Is it supposed to be random, or is it a conspiracy theory against McDonalds and comicbook characters?

These episodes are getting tiresome. I want more epic ones with BBQ smoking crack, or with him insulting someone on a bar. More farts. Etcetra. But if you have to make another, add Ernest Rutherford.

~ Frost

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

I put these up at the same time as bbq travels around the world insulting people on the bar.

[Happy birthday Afro_Stud!]

omfg

Bahamut, you know how to make an intro look good. Sadly, your voice makes children poop in their pants and cry. Since this is so hard to do, you get the tenner from me. Afro's voice was awesome, but then again, BlueHippo is the god of everything flashrelated.

You all seem too lazy to draw new pictures of yourself, and just used the profile image. but since this is so personalized, you get ten in overall as well. Happy b-day Afro! <3

~ Frost

kinggila responds:

Hey, Roflmuffin made the intro, not me! And good if I make children poop in their pants and cry! I HATE children! Yes, Afro's voice was awesome!

Didn't I tell you on MSN not to call me lazy since I've been reviewing my ass off and I made this flash. Besides, I like using that sprite figure as me!

Thank you for the 10 Frostbreath! <3

-Bahamut

[WE WANT FUN!]

FBF's are almost always nice.

This one is too. However, i want more content than colourful lines. You pretty much milked out everything you can do with straight lines. So yeah, you won't get high scores on the graphics table from me, simply beacuse drawing a line is really what i'd call difficult. but of course you'll get higher in style beacuse, simply, i favour FBF's. It's a pleasure for my eyes, as long as they're not boring and having repeated moves over and over. Sadly, i had one of those moments here.

I'll give you a boost in originality though, since this is the first FBF i've seen containing lyrics. Which gives me the impression that you made this flash soley beacuse of the song. That's cool, music videos are most welcome. They tend to get higher scores depending on what emotions they send. This is the happy kind, and i dig it.

The rest is blank, and will not be part of the overall score. I see that you made this flash almost half a year ago, so i trust that you've made some improvements since that time.

~ Frost

JimmyDodger responds:

Well, I'm glad you liked it I guess.

I wasn't really going for the style in this one. It was more of a movie to see...if I could do it. Obviously, I can, and I regret not adding more than just...lines. I guess you realised I was running out of ideas to do.
But it wasn't really solely for the song. I just felt like trying out a FBF movie, and I was just looking for an upbeat song with a nice catchy rhythm. Then I found this baby. And with the lyrics...Just thought it would have more zing with them.

And oh yeah baby. I've improved. Just really lazy nowadays, but I'll get another movie done. I swear I will.

Thanks.