Lol
This is more like a parody to the whole ambient genre.
I don't deny that i might find tunes like this on Drone Zone, but it would more likely make me change the channel. So it's supposed to be trippy. Since i don't do drugs, i can't tell if it has any effect.
Personally, i'm more into soothing ambient used for relaxation purposes. And even if i did like songs like this one, i doubt i'd raise it many points anyway.
My advice would be to skip this type of songs completely. I have no idea how to improve this. Keep doing music though, you most certainly will get better.
~ Frost