Frostbreath's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sid Psychotic Short]

Hmm......

That dude got some serious issues. And how would a condom protect a bird from being reincarnated adter getting it's head chopped of by a window? It was so crazy, that it actually was funny! Also, nice work with the shading, that probably raised the score with another 0.50. But try multiple time with your voice acting, cuz i don't won't to hear your breath or the voice fucked up beacuse you talk to loud. But in overall: slightly above average.

~ Frost

Bloodthirsty-Spike responds:

The whole bird with a condom was just a silly thing...just to make people chuckle, the condom didn't actually protect the bird...it was a play on words. Anyway, thanks for your feedback :D

[The Chadwicks: Episode 1]

Excellent

H-i-larious, man. I'm impressed. Your drawing skills are as nearest perfection! Though when people started walking, it took them quite a while to get fram A to B (wife putting turkey in oven, for example). But what the hey. Also it was a superb idea to make the audience shout when they saw the neighbours face.

In overall: Not much more can be done. YOu've created an award winning flash!

- Frost

[Zombie Noodles]

Well....

That was super short, if you know what i mean. It was so short, i didn't even get what it was all about. Was he a bag of noodles eating a bag of noodles or what?
Graphics we're all right! No need to improve that. Also, it was enough stylish.
Good choice of music! Really thought that it fitted in with the movie.

Overall: Slightly below average, just beacuse of the length of the movie. 2/5

- Frost

[Combat Stix]

Average

I think this could get somewhere if you:

Add some background music. Allways nice with some music.
Make it faster. That'll raise style points.
Add more sticks, coming from outside the frame.
Work on your animating skill with those weapons. Try to at least get at the same level as Ringfingers.

But in overall, i see hoe this was protected. I vote 2, just beacuse i know that you have the potential to make it better.

- Frostbreath

Caius-Deluxe7 responds:

Ringfingers? No way >___>
But thanks for your review

[The Yellow Cheese]

Well how 'bout that

Nice preloader.

Nice choice of music. But those sounds you get when you buy it coukd've been left out. Didn't like it when it collided with the music.

Pretty good graphics. Really good job with the shading.
But there is some crazy storyline here.
A dude sneaks into a supermarket, puts some biological, high-tech fluid on one bit of cheese. Another guy buys it. Chews it. Gets his head chopped of. Did tat fluid super fast cratea monster inside that guys body? a bit alien-ish.

But in overall, very good.

- Frostbreath

carmelhadinosaur responds:

Heh thanks!
Sorry about the sounds, I didn't even know how to lower the volume of it back then..
That monster thingy is actually something I made as a submission, a really douchbagy one, it was called 'The Lion Monster'. I asked good ol' Wade to delete it :D
Oh and I don't know where that monster came from lol

[Eternal Complexity]

Now we're talkin'

Lol @ Rave eJay. But that made the movie even better.

Insanely well drawn, not to mention the hard work you must've put down on this project.

Sarting from outer sapce and ending with......... i'm sorry, i didn't watch the whole thing, so, you tell me. I stopped at sugar. Anyway, that was a magnificent idea. I wish there was some way for me to steal it :D

5/5

- Frostbreath

carmelhadinosaur responds:

Thanks!!
Well, after the sugar it goes all the way to a Neutrino. I don't want to spoil the rest with words ;)

[Stupid Cop]

Interesting

This is something out of the ordinary. Was this one of your first flashes? If so, i wont be nagging about your drawing skills.

Let's see..... a guy pushes out a girl through the window, girl falls, policecar rolls in the scren, policeman steps out and screams ''Freeze!'', girl freezes, STOP!

That was pretty funny when the girl froze, litterally. But that didn't seem to slow the fall though.

CONTINUE, Girl smashes in the police car, STOP.

I looked somewhat well drawn when the car became shattered metal. But it also seems like due to where the girl landed, the cop didn't aim at her.

Overall, a slightly above average movie, with some good moments, even though the movie was pretty short.

- Frostbreath

carmelhadinosaur responds:

Yay above average, thanks! :D
I think that's a guy not a girl btw, but I can't tellol..
I dunno if it's one of my first, I used to make tons of stuff but alot were just drawings and try outs of loops or so.. So maybe :)
Liked to hear it had good moments considering its length (;D