Frostbreath's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Car Trouble]

Great idea!

Hey,hey, that's a pretty nice idea you've got. I like it!

Still, things you need to improve:

Graphics. I'm sorry man but you can't draw for shit. You need to practice a lot more if you expect to get around 2.50. Try collaborating with someone at our Flash forum.
Movie length. Have you ever watched Knick Knack? I want it that long, with quantity of tools to choose between.
Sound. Please, could you add some swearing? That would improve it.

Things i liked:

Your intense humor. But that's also about it.

- Frostbreath

[Mcneb and Gohan Robbery]

Not good at all.

What is this? A crappy LL movie that contains no humor? Aw man, that's what makes Locks and Clocks special! Let's get this overwith.

Things that needs improvement:

Movie length. I want it much longer, and most of all, FINISHED!
One single shot was seen. Add a gunfight or something.
Work day and night with the script.
I want a funny conversation between these locks. If you guys can't make that, try making a music video but that better contain Awesome graphics.

Things i liked:

The graphic nature of the killed peach. But that is also it.

C'mon, i know you can make this shit funny!
Btw, TurdCluck > you

- Frostbreath

N4LBenji responds:

Well whatever you believe

[TurdClock's Journey Pt. 3]

Yay!

This is the best fucking clock movie i've seen, you stupid peice of shit :D. Man, it's good to see that you're back. You sure are the most 1337 clock (well, except for SBC, of course).

There is no complains. Excellent work.

- Frostbreath

TurdClock responds:

ogm teh 1337 review!1

[hill fight]

Pretty good

Too bad you probably won't make a part2.

ANYHO..... Things i liked:

The fast tweening and the realistic moves.

Things i didn't like:

The small window, i'd love it if you made it larger.
The music. Sure, i like that theme too, but it was a crappy remix that you found.
The fact that you didn't make this a full movie, instead you diecided to bring it in part. It's a stick fighting movie, for crying out loud!.

Overall: Still above average. I put a lot of wieght on the style score. I'd love to see more of your work!

- Frostbreath

[Prototype Ballistix]

This a test, you say?

Well then, i'm really looking forward to see the actual movie.

I really love that fast tweening, especially in fighting movies. It highers its score with at least 0.50. Sound fitted perfectly. Blood and gore! Some music would've been nice, but i take for granted that you'll add it in the real movie.

If i am to remark one thing..... is it the bullet. Bullets aint square, y'know.

Overall: This shows far more promise than any test movie i've seen.

- Frostbreath

[R.F]

Too short

And not that original idea for a flash either. Do you have any idea how many movies like this one i see..... daily? At least 10.

BUT...... this movie is slightly better beacuse it has some blood in it. Though it would have looked more real if you had put the spear behind him instead.

And not too many of these flashes has sound or music in it.

I beleive that you're too goodto be making these movies. Try something else, cuz i belvieve that you have potential.

-Frostbreath

[Nim's Winter tale]

Oj du...

Jisses jösses. Vad ska jag säga? Jag vill bara överrösa dig med komplimanger. Grafiken är otrolig. Storyn är otrolig. Ja baske mig om inte hela filmen är utomordentligt otrolig. Du får en etta i våldsamhet för den där snöbollen också.....

Detta är visserligen inte den första filmen på NG med svensk tal, men jag blev ändå glatt överraskad till tusen!

Bra jobbat.

[Stick warzone]

Alright

That IS good graphics, even for a stick movie. Though it wasn't that detailed.

Average Style, the way the bodies fell was kinda odd, and some more blood could be added. You made the run just perfectly though.

Good sound quality, but i'd love it if you added music. It can do wonders, you know?

Can't say it was too much violence, poor blood and on top of that, the movie was really short. I mean you couldn't even tell who won. Or how many sticks there was left.

If you just make this movie longer, and follow my advices, we have a movie that'll exceed 3.00 for sure.

[Everlife Trailer]

Not quite it.

The graphics were allright. Not amazing, but good enough. Could be better if you changed from 12bps to 25 or 30.

I've heard that song many times before. If it weren't for it, i never would've realised that he was chasing that ball. Also it was really boring to watch him chasing it for 2 mins.

But i see lot of potential in you. As i said, the graphics were the better in this movie, and probably the reason why this movie got protected.

Also, i'm sick of all these trailers that doesn't show anything interesting about the movie.

Neko responds:

^_^, i forgot about that, crap, i feel bad now, i shall make a better trailer know that i have some more ideas about my movie

[Harlequin]

Average

The graphics were ok, except for the blood ( it isn't that nice when you just see a red line that supposedly is blood).

As for the sound it's slighly above average of what i see daily. I.e, neither very good or awfully bad.

The violence contained a few frames were i suppose the head was ripped off. As i said before, the bad quality of blood effects loweres the score radically.

I don't see any humour in this at all, but since i'm not sure, i gave you one point.

Also, make this movie longer. I'm sorry to say that this movie is a waste of 20 seconds. (But don't just improve it on this point, i don't want to waste 2 minutes either).

Good luck on your second one!