Frostbreath's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Combat Stix]

Average

I think this could get somewhere if you:

Add some background music. Allways nice with some music.
Make it faster. That'll raise style points.
Add more sticks, coming from outside the frame.
Work on your animating skill with those weapons. Try to at least get at the same level as Ringfingers.

But in overall, i see hoe this was protected. I vote 2, just beacuse i know that you have the potential to make it better.

- Frostbreath

Caius-Deluxe7 responds:

Ringfingers? No way >___>
But thanks for your review

[The Yellow Cheese]

Well how 'bout that

Nice preloader.

Nice choice of music. But those sounds you get when you buy it coukd've been left out. Didn't like it when it collided with the music.

Pretty good graphics. Really good job with the shading.
But there is some crazy storyline here.
A dude sneaks into a supermarket, puts some biological, high-tech fluid on one bit of cheese. Another guy buys it. Chews it. Gets his head chopped of. Did tat fluid super fast cratea monster inside that guys body? a bit alien-ish.

But in overall, very good.

- Frostbreath

carmelhadinosaur responds:

Heh thanks!
Sorry about the sounds, I didn't even know how to lower the volume of it back then..
That monster thingy is actually something I made as a submission, a really douchbagy one, it was called 'The Lion Monster'. I asked good ol' Wade to delete it :D
Oh and I don't know where that monster came from lol

[Eternal Complexity]

Now we're talkin'

Lol @ Rave eJay. But that made the movie even better.

Insanely well drawn, not to mention the hard work you must've put down on this project.

Sarting from outer sapce and ending with......... i'm sorry, i didn't watch the whole thing, so, you tell me. I stopped at sugar. Anyway, that was a magnificent idea. I wish there was some way for me to steal it :D

5/5

- Frostbreath

carmelhadinosaur responds:

Thanks!!
Well, after the sugar it goes all the way to a Neutrino. I don't want to spoil the rest with words ;)

[Stupid Cop]

Interesting

This is something out of the ordinary. Was this one of your first flashes? If so, i wont be nagging about your drawing skills.

Let's see..... a guy pushes out a girl through the window, girl falls, policecar rolls in the scren, policeman steps out and screams ''Freeze!'', girl freezes, STOP!

That was pretty funny when the girl froze, litterally. But that didn't seem to slow the fall though.

CONTINUE, Girl smashes in the police car, STOP.

I looked somewhat well drawn when the car became shattered metal. But it also seems like due to where the girl landed, the cop didn't aim at her.

Overall, a slightly above average movie, with some good moments, even though the movie was pretty short.

- Frostbreath

carmelhadinosaur responds:

Yay above average, thanks! :D
I think that's a guy not a girl btw, but I can't tellol..
I dunno if it's one of my first, I used to make tons of stuff but alot were just drawings and try outs of loops or so.. So maybe :)
Liked to hear it had good moments considering its length (;D

[Tails and his GBA 2]

You. Got. Good. Score!

Extremely well done. You sure know how to make a funny dialouge. Could've been better with voice acting, but since it's a sprite movie, i understand why you left that out.

Subtitles were high above average. But switching colours you could easily know who was talking. A major +, indeed.

And the many options and extras! That is candy, dulcet, bon merceau, godis, and other languages i'm not familiar with. All in all, this movie could easily win awards, which it also did.

Superb work!

- Frostbreath

RupeeClock responds:

Thanks for referencing my profile pic. ;)

[Clock/Lock War Trailer]

2 things...

1. People don't like trailers. Especially not me. Instead of submitting a trailer, and a crappy one on top of that, submit the whole movie when it's finished. This trailer didn't make me long for this movie to come out.

2. The 2 first lines that were sliding in the window. The came from the wrong direction. Do you think it's enjoyable to read a text backwards? Didn't thinks so.

- Frostbreath

N4LBenji responds:

Sorry about the text

[Mcneb and Gohan Robbery]

Not good at all.

What is this? A crappy LL movie that contains no humor? Aw man, that's what makes Locks and Clocks special! Let's get this overwith.

Things that needs improvement:

Movie length. I want it much longer, and most of all, FINISHED!
One single shot was seen. Add a gunfight or something.
Work day and night with the script.
I want a funny conversation between these locks. If you guys can't make that, try making a music video but that better contain Awesome graphics.

Things i liked:

The graphic nature of the killed peach. But that is also it.

C'mon, i know you can make this shit funny!
Btw, TurdCluck > you

- Frostbreath

N4LBenji responds:

Well whatever you believe

[TurdClock's Journey Pt. 3]

Yay!

This is the best fucking clock movie i've seen, you stupid peice of shit :D. Man, it's good to see that you're back. You sure are the most 1337 clock (well, except for SBC, of course).

There is no complains. Excellent work.

- Frostbreath

TurdClock responds:

ogm teh 1337 review!1