Frostbreath's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ZAMG B B B]

Wuut?

You didn't even motion tween, only fake motion tween but you ised frame by frame instead oh my god. You realise you could've saved soooo much time!

happy clock day

~ Frost

[Madness On Clockday]

Nein!

The correct actionscript to put in the last fram:

stop()

Done. Happy clock day.

~ Frost

[[CC] Clock Day '07]

Boo

I never thought YOU'D do it :P

Happy clock day.

~ Frost

PureLionHeart responds:

I had to. This Clock Day is amazing, and I just had to contribute.

Happy Clock Day to you too, my friend, and thanks for the review.

[The Allround Tutorial FIX]

Okay

It was an educative flash, i'll give you that. But why would you apologize about the graphics? If you know they're horrible, why not fix it before you submit the flash in the first place?

One of the things i found VERY annoying was the fact that you switched the placement of the buttons slightly after each frame. You don't have to make a new frame for that, leave the button as it is in the firt frame and add following AS:

nextFrame()

It's that simple, it will take you to the next freame and stop it. I'm guessing you have the gotoandstop() for each frame, right? Hope i helped out on that.

Also, make the text easier to read and more pleasurable to view. Use light and soft colours instead of strong, choppy ones like black...

Still, keep up the good work!

~ Frost

[Assassination]

Naw :(

Losing a .fla file of a such kickass movie? That sucks man...

I really think you should start over with the same concept. It's THAT good. The characters were the next generation madness, with lots of details and such. Except that the aliens are too human-like, but that's just me being picky. You truly have put lots of effortinto everything; the characters, the weapons, the background, even the selection of music (or was it? it fits perfectly, none the less). Another thing that is in the "final touch department" would be making the flash more fast pace and more rythmic, meaning, make the slashes and gunshot fun to listen to as if it were music. Not easily done, but as good as this flash was, it's almost the only thing that can be done.

I'd hate it for this flash to never be finished. It's not often i see a madness-based flash with such great potential.

Keep up the good work!

~ Frost

[Halo Random!]

...Mario?

I fail to see the connetion with Mario. Are you generalizing all sprites simply as.. Mario? Oh well. But it's sprites, not mario.

How clever of you to use a black background to hide the fact that you haven't cut out the sprites. Just trace bitmap, and the annoying background can be removed alot easier.
Horrible voice acting along with pointless sound effects is not instant win. Use sounds that actually sound good, and don't use your voice if you can't act worth a thing.
Increase the framerate. I can't think of a single movie that i've found to be good with a framerate of less than 24. And finally, don't use sprites unless you know what you're doing. have patience, practice at animating and maybe soon you will have a flash that the audience will like. Until then, don't feed the portal with 1.5 - 2.0 movies. Thanks you.

Good luck though.

~ Frost

[Rebbelious Monks Failure]

Nice work

Awesome job on the graphics. Fantastic. Too bad you wont finish this one though. Could've used voice acting so that there would at least be a plot in this. Even subtitles would do. You must've thought of a plot before you made it, right?

Keep up the good work.

~ Frost