Close to perfection
As far as an art animation goes, this is as perfect as it gets, in my humble oppinion. All of the characters was animated in a neat style, though it was a bit lacking when it comes to colour, since black and white isn't much of what you can call quantity. Even the faces where drawin in those two colours, but you managed to make it look awesome anyway. And it was interesting to see a colour theme like this, with green and yeallow backgrounds, and hvaing black and white characters populating the enviroment. It made it hard to tell if there was any climate though. It became less natural then, i like it more if it had the same atmosphere as in any of Adam Phillips work. But this is still one of the finest graphic movies i've seen in some time.
The music was great, no doubt about it. I even am a fan to that kind of ambient music. Must put that name on my memory. However, since that was the only sound in this movie, you don't get it very high. At least not compared to how awesome the graphics were. No, i'd like it if you used some sound effects, it would've done wonders, i am sure of it.
The violence in this flash was not about having blood flying around or exposion lungs or kidneys to the audience, but it was still nasty. I mean, getting eaten by a machine (bankomat, perhaps), is not something you'd want to witness during your day. And then thug go shot down by the bird.
Which leads us to the script of this toon. it's about oppresion, i could tell that. The bugs come in, put an one eyed google that is powered by electricity, and forces them to wait in line, in order to get executed. If that was the point of standing line, i am not sure of. And what i am even more unsure of, is the ending. Some sort of data got traversed to the single user. But what did it do? Will that guy continue to oppress the people, or was it about something highly unpredictable? After seeing this movie, i am somewhat certain that it's going to end up being the second option. And this ending also leaves the door open for a sequel.
I'd be very happy to see more work from you, beacuse this is clearly nothing you see everyday. Keep up the fantastic work!
~ Frost